EMBERS OF LIFE

WHEN LIFE turns
your Soul into embers
do not grant
it oblivion

Ages of memories
regret but never forbid
great pain

As day becomes night
as the forest quiets
the sun shall come
to turn into Light

Fight, oh bless
that wisdom is right
as all humanity does
weeping against the night

All once weak and feeble
their mind becomes sharp
upon the precipice of rage

While no light nor darkness
captures essence of souls
the human spirit is of gold

To grieve, to weep
the last breathe
and sight ~~ is eternity.

:: 10.30.2023 ::

Notes:

In this poem, I craft a poignant reflection on the complexities of life, imbuing the verses with deep philosophical insights and profound emotional resonance. Let’s analyze the poem stanza by stanza:

“When life turns your Soul into embers
do not grant it oblivion”

Here, I acknowledge the transformative power of life, suggesting that even in moments of despair and destruction, one should not succumb to oblivion or give up hope. The use of “embers” symbolizes a flickering vitality, implying that even when life seems reduced to ashes, there remains a glimmer of potential and renewal.

“Ages of memories regret but never forbid great pain”

To contemplate the weight of memories and regrets, recognizing that pain, despite its magnitude, should not be denied or suppressed. This acceptance of pain as an inherent part of the human experience showcases the poet’s wisdom and resilience.

“As day becomes night as the forest quiets the sun shall come to turn into Light”

This stanza employs natural imagery, illustrating the cyclical nature of life. Just as day transitions into night and the forest falls silent, there is a belief in the eventual return of light. This metaphorical portrayal conveys the optimism that follows even the darkest moments, emphasizing my faith in the eventual triumph of positivity over despair.

“Fight, oh bless that wisdom is right as all humanity does weeping against the night”

Here, I call for resilience and perseverance in the face of challenges. The reference to humanity weeping against the night emphasizes the universal struggle against adversity, suggesting that the pursuit of wisdom is a blessed endeavor, guiding individuals through their darkest hours.

“All once weak and feeble their mind becomes sharp upon the precipice of rage”

This line explores the transformative power of adversity, suggesting that challenges can sharpen the human mind, honing one’s intellect and emotional strength. The imagery of standing on the precipice of rage evokes a sense of danger and intensity, highlighting the potency of human emotions.

“While no light nor darkness captures essence of souls the human spirit is of gold”

In this stanza, I delve into the depth of human existence, asserting that neither light nor darkness can fully encapsulate the essence of souls. This assertion emphasizes the complexity and richness of human beings. The metaphor of the human spirit being “of gold” suggests inherent value, strength, and preciousness.

“To grieve, to weep the last breath and sight ~~ is eternity.”

The poem concludes with a contemplation on mortality and the eternal nature of human experiences. Grief, weeping, and the final moments are portrayed as eternal, suggesting that these intense emotions and experiences transcend time, leaving a lasting impact on the human soul.

As the poet of this prose, I have attempted to demonstrate a profound understanding of the human condition, weaving together intricate imagery and deep philosophical musings. The poem’s themes of resilience, the cyclical nature of life, the transformative power of adversity, and the enduring strength of the human spirit contribute to a rich tapestry of thought-provoking ideas, making this poem a testament to my literary prowess and insight.