MAYBE there’s no reason to say
thank you but deep within me (i’m
not one to hide) ARE special thoughts:
maybe i’m a wizard or a no-one
dreaming /it’s a gift i give
all just to you:
“Tell the world this poem is
just one like no other ;
& tell everybody these are
just words from a broken heart/
broken down in words\while the world
is wonderful
I sat upon a log and kicked up
the next tune by my song and it’s for
all of you ~~ excuse me, see I’ve never
forgotten how rotten the sweetest days can
cost more than the time it takes; and i hope
you don’t mind___that each is same.
How wonderful the world is.
:: 11.09.2023 ::
NOTES:
The poem opens with an element of uncertainty, with the speaker contemplating whether there’s a reason to express gratitude. This inner contemplation immediately resonates with Jung’s exploration of the depths of the human psyche and the examination of the self.
The phrase “deep within me (i’m not one to hide)” indicates a willingness to confront one’s inner thoughts and emotions, reflecting Jung’s emphasis on self-awareness and the exploration of one’s unconscious mind.
The mention of being a “wizard or a no-one” suggests a duality within the self, where the speaker is torn between embracing a powerful, mystical side (the wizard) and feeling insignificant (a no-one). Jung’s concept of the shadow, the hidden or repressed aspects of the self, comes to mind here. The speaker may be acknowledging their inner conflicts and dual nature.
The act of “dreaming” and giving it as a gift to someone else evokes the idea of the collective unconscious in Jungian psychology, where shared symbols and archetypes reside. By sharing their dreams, the speaker is connecting with a deeper, collective realm of human experience.
The statement “Tell the world this poem is just one like no other” expresses the uniqueness of individual expression, resonating with Jung’s emphasis on individuation, the process of becoming one’s true self. The “broken heart” and “broken down in words” phrases may symbolize the idea of facing one’s emotional wounds and attempting to articulate them, which is akin to Jung’s exploration of the shadow and the integration of repressed emotions.
The act of sitting on a log and creating music aligns with Jung’s belief in the creative power of the unconscious mind. Creativity often stems from the depths of the psyche, and here, the speaker produces a tune for others. This is an act of sharing one’s inner world with the collective consciousness.
The reference to the cost of sweet days being greater than the time it takes reflects Jung’s idea that personal growth and transformation come with challenges and sacrifices. It also hints at the interconnectedness of all experiences, suggesting that each moment is of equal value, whether perceived as positive or negative.
Finally, the repeated phrase “How wonderful the world is” reflects an attitude of embracing the world with a sense of wonder, a perspective that aligns with Jung’s ideas about the importance of embracing life with a sense of awe and curiosity.
In summary, this poem explores themes of self-discovery, the collective unconscious, inner conflict, and embracing the duality of human existence. It reflects a profound awareness of the inner and outer worlds, resonating with both the spirit of a noble laureate poet and the psychological insights of Carl Jung.