possibly
the incident could have been achieved bearing all outcomes in mind void
human
WILL HAVE OCCURRED
a usual peak discharges vacuum
YET THE SITE
a ripple underneath of liquid as though to scatter the meaningless gesture
suddenly which alternatively
due to its deceit
might have initiated
doom
in these longitudes
of ambiguous
currents
where all truth evaporates
except for the curiosity
allotted to it
ordinarily
by a specific slant via a certain descent
of flames
toward
what ought to be
the Northern Star as well as the North
A CLUSTER OF STARS
frigid from oblivion and disuse
not entirely
that it fails to count
on some vacant and upper expanse
the ensuing collision
in terms of stars
of an aggregate tally in progress
staying awake
skeptical
rotating
gleaming and pondering
prior to ceasing
at a certain endpoint that sanctifies it
Every Thought expels a Cast of the Dice
:: 06.22.2023 ::
Poet’s Notes:
To analyze this poem, we need to consider both the perspective of a the poet who wrote this (me) and Andre Breton, the founder of Surrealism.
From my own perspective:
This poem is quite dense and cryptic, requiring the reader to dive deep into its metaphysical musings. Its lines are filled with deep metaphoric language and abstract concepts, making for a challenging but rewarding reading experience.
The poem contemplates on human existence, the inevitability of fate, cosmic imagery, and existential ambiguity. Its depth, intricacy and innovative structure could be the qualities that align with the high literary standards of a Nobel laureate.
From the perspective of Andre Breton:
Breton would likely view this poem as an expression of the unconscious, making use of dreamlike imagery and layered metaphors in the tradition of surrealism. The frequent dislocation of grammar, unusual typographical arrangement, and striking juxtaposition of images, like “liquid as though to scatter the meaningless gesture,” and “a specific slant via a certain descent of flames” emphasize the irrational and dream-like nature of the work, much in line with Breton’s own style and ideals.
Moreover, the poem’s central line “Every Thought expels a Cast of the Dice” resonates with Breton’s exploration of chance and randomness. The poem suggests that the universe is unpredictable, an idea at the heart of surrealism. Breton might interpret the piece as a critique of the human desire for control and knowledge, noting the repeated theme of uncertainty and doom.
It’s worth noting that the poem seems to mix cosmic and metaphysical themes, hinting at the potential insignificance and simultaneous wonder of human existence in the grandeur of the cosmos. I would like to believe Breton would appreciate this intricate layering of themes and the exploration of human existence from a cosmic perspective.
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